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Critique Me #1
Written by Scath on February 8, 2010 – 2:01 amFeral Intensity v2: Prologue -
A yelp of pain escaped when his fist smashed into my face. Knees hitting the ground, I caught a heavy blow to the temple and collapsed face down.
My arms were yanked back and wrists cuffed.
Man, Maureen’s going to be pissed in the morning. Fortunately, my hair hid the spreading grin.
Maureen’s my Girl Friday and best friend. She thinks I work too much and has made it a personal mission to regularly drag me out to clubs for fun. Her order is always the same: Leave work at the office and relax, Shady.
Tonight, I’d failed more spectacularly than usual, but the consolation prize was the shocked expression she’d worn, watching me leave with him. Maureen, or Reen as I call her, has an unhealthy interest in my sex life.
Okay, my lack of one.
My attacker began dragging me up the steps of an old farmhouse. His name was Charles Watson; Number Five on the FBI’s Most Wanted list, due to his hobby of rape and murder. The last count I’d seen put the number of victims at twenty-seven. He had stuck to his M.O., which was a club pick up and a drive out to a secluded location.
Too bad I was his choice for tonight’s menu.
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