Whispers: paranormal WIP
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April 1, 2010, Author: Scath, 5 Comments

#FridayFlash – Snapped

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It was because of the music; the constant, pounding, blaring music ruining the peace of every night.

The drunken yelling, screamed curses and sudden brawls breaking out had done their part.

After years of it, she just…snapped.

The first shot took out the old man. He wouldn’t be yelling about how it was ‘my fuckin’ house’ anymore. The second took out the daughter-in-law and shut her screeching off forever.

The third took out the son, her husband. There’d be no more yelled declarations of how tough he was; no more baiting of the starving, scarred dogs kept chained in the backyard.

Sighing, she sent a final bullet into the car’s stereo and blissful quiet fell. With a smile, she crossed the street to return home.

She’d barely stepped inside when the newly born quiet was shattered by sirens.

Frowning, she reloaded the gun and waited.

Her job wasn’t over yet.

  • http://www.carrieclevenger.com/ Carrie Clevenger

    This was tough; quick. A blow to the head. Nice.
    .-= Carrie Clevenger´s last blog .."Two Scoops" #Fridayflash =-.

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  • http://www.johnwiswell.blogspot.com John Wiswell

    Savage little piece. The most interesting bit, at least for me, was the paragraphing of the “The first” and “The third” paragraphs. Paragraphing them like that suggests a lot of time passed between the first two and the third shots, since One and Two are grouped together, almost like she left and came back. That makes it eerier.
    .-= John Wiswell´s last blog ..Bathroom Monologue: Miracle of Bed =-.

  • http://sulcicollective.blogspot.com marc nash

    Yup we had neighbours like that. Sadly in the UK we don’t have the right to bear arms…

    marc nash

  • http://mazzz-in-leeds.com mazzz_in_Leeds

    Cracking little piece
    The fact that she was “frowning” was particularly potent
    .-= mazzz_in_Leeds´s last blog ..Page 247 =-.